I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 21 and my teacher is Mrs Lagitupu.
Sunday, September 13, 2009
A Scary Suprise
As I dive in to the tranquil water I notice a fin over my shoulder. My heart races as I paddle faster and faster, the fin approaches me, closer and closer. I shut my eyes and stood still. I could feel the water wrapping it's way around me. I started to mope and opened my eyes. I couldn't believe it. There, standing right in front of me, was an actual swimming.............DOLPHIN!!!!! I swam with the creature until I could not swim any more. I blinked 10 times and then saw my dad in the dolphin's place. I guess I was in now for our game of water tiggy. I wonder what happened to that dreamy dolphin.
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Love it! Dad a dolphin! Toreka I love reading your writing as you come up with new and capturing ways to keep your audience reading through to the end of your posts. Keep it going Dreamy Dolphin!
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That is great Toreka I have never seen one of those in my life but I hope that I see one of them when I go for camp to Kawau Islands!!!!
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