Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Ala's Sleepover


My very first sleep over how exciting! It was so cool that I couldn't stop smiling!
As the night was still young, we had a load of fun!
When we finished painting our nails, we began to tell scary tales.
We started to sing, knowing that the theme was bling.
We roasted marshmallows, white and puffy. We also had candy floss, very fluffy.
We went to Sylvia park, a very good remark.
I had a really good time, Ala was truly kind.

But everyone knows: A birthday's a day so lovely and good, when all special plans turn out as the should. When happiness and delight touches all that you do for a birthday's a day that's made for just you.

Happy Birthday Ala
You can also go on to Ala's blog too.

2 comments:

  1. What a fabulous post Toreka. So many lovely aspects to it that I don't know where to start...
    Ok, the poetry. Well done! You even managed to use a style of poetry that could have come straight out of a birthday card :) I also loved the way you have made the event special for your friend, including sharing the love by hyperlinking to her blog.
    It sounds like it was a most fun birthday party.
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Hey Toreka

    what an awsome story that you have written Toreka.you really hook me in your story.keep up the great writing that you are doing right there.

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