Monday, June 15, 2009

White With Black Splotches




I am an animal and I say moo,I gaze on grass and I give milk too.
A shady tree is just the right spot, I rest under them on a day that's hot.
Flowers cover me from head to toe, it even tickles my nose.
I give milk products that ends up in a dairy, that sits on your shelf next to the berries.
I am white with black splotches.
Can you guess what I am?

I am a cow.

3 comments:

  1. Hi cow...haha! Toreka I loved reading this! I think the way you have described a cow with bits of rhyming and clues throughout made it fun to read. I think you are becoming very good at writing.

    Love what you are producing my dear.

    Mum
    xx

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Toreka,
    What a cool piece of writing :)
    The first line really hooked me in.
    Keep it up.
    Mr Fletcher

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thanks Mr Fletcher!
    I first got in to poems when Ms Squires kept on hanging poems everywhere! I hope I can publish my other poem!

    Toreka

    ReplyDelete