I am an animal and I say moo,I gaze on grass and I give milk too.
A shady tree is just the right spot, I rest under them on a day that's hot.
Flowers cover me from head to toe, it even tickles my nose.
I give milk products that ends up in a dairy, that sits on your shelf next to the berries.
I am white with black splotches.
Can you guess what I am?
I am a cow.
Hi cow...haha! Toreka I loved reading this! I think the way you have described a cow with bits of rhyming and clues throughout made it fun to read. I think you are becoming very good at writing.
ReplyDeleteLove what you are producing my dear.
Mum
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Hi Toreka,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool piece of writing :)
The first line really hooked me in.
Keep it up.
Mr Fletcher
Thanks Mr Fletcher!
ReplyDeleteI first got in to poems when Ms Squires kept on hanging poems everywhere! I hope I can publish my other poem!
Toreka