tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post7955521028212808560..comments2023-09-28T20:25:51.480+13:00Comments on Toreka Pt England School: Me & My Little Bother, I mean BrotherTalanoa Maihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13775135805453929438noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-52399983257129397392011-02-22T00:04:01.639+13:002011-02-22T00:04:01.639+13:00Funny title too Toreka! I know how delayed is mum...Funny title too Toreka! I know how delayed is mum, I think I went straight into your post missing the title the first time around.<br />Love you <br />Mummumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-57576113474068763992010-11-08T09:06:04.460+13:002010-11-08T09:06:04.460+13:00Toreka,
What a great story about you and your lit...Toreka,<br /><br />What a great story about you and your little brother. My little sister does the same thing. Great use of vocab. I think your 5th paragraph was fantastic! Keep Up the Great Work!<br /><br />ShoalShoalhttp://pesshoalm.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-15649082786324329272010-10-20T11:57:19.488+13:002010-10-20T11:57:19.488+13:00Hi Toreka,
I really enjoyed reading the story of...Hi Toreka, <br /><br />I really enjoyed reading the story of an annoying brother. I have a brother which is sooo annoying like yours. It might be hard for you because you are the only girl in your family. The part I really liked in your story was the 1st paragraph. It was awesome. It really hooked me in. The thing I think you should improve in your writing is that you should make your sentences more clear because, I didn't really understand a few things you were trying to say. Anyways good luck.<br /><br />Your Sincerely, <br />MubasshiraMubasshirahttp://pesmubasshiram.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-63167480437674872862010-10-18T20:55:43.701+13:002010-10-18T20:55:43.701+13:00Hi Toreka,
I completely understand the annoyance o...Hi Toreka,<br />I completely understand the annoyance of little brothers, you just wait until he is bigger than you like mine is! Don't worry, it will get better when he is big enough for you be able to have him do things for you.<br />Though I can't promise little brothers ever stop trying to annoy you :)<br />Ashleigh BurtAshleigh Burthttp://auahatanga.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-22729600020349962252010-10-14T21:51:31.475+13:002010-10-14T21:51:31.475+13:00Tackle him aye?! Toreka I had to laugh a few time...Tackle him aye?! Toreka I had to laugh a few times while reading this post. You know - your brother likes to annoy you though when you leave him behind - out shopping with Aunty etc...he misses you so much. He often starts being very sad and asks after you non stop! Keep up the good writing Toreka. A fun read indeed.<br />Love MumMumnoreply@blogger.com