tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post4179150631296097988..comments2023-09-28T20:25:51.480+13:00Comments on Toreka Pt England School: Rapunzel's Revenge Part 1Talanoa Maihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13775135805453929438noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-50441965282340984732009-08-21T19:31:55.689+12:002009-08-21T19:31:55.689+12:00Oooooh you are building suspense here Toreka. My ...Oooooh you are building suspense here Toreka. My favourite sentence is "Just hearing her voice makes people feel like a poisonous snake is slithering down their backs".<br />Please don't make us wait too long for the next instalment :)<br />Mrs BurtMrs Burthttp://kpetv.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211420120756872346.post-63811699613921959022009-08-19T08:22:35.039+12:002009-08-19T08:22:35.039+12:00Hi Toreka,
WOW! I really liked the way that you us...Hi Toreka,<br />WOW! I really liked the way that you used adverbs and describing words in your story. Keep it up!My favourite bit was when you said she cackles no nicer than having a cactus needle poking you.Tino pai Toreka.<br /><br />Bye for now!!!Alahttp://pesroom15.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com